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Silence Left Unbroken by =Agent-Angel:iconAgent-Angel:



My heads a jumble of silly things
Violent thoughts all circling
I walk past folks that plainly see
How thoroughly you’ve broken me

I have no destination
And my tongue feels rough and dry
This sudden isolation
Has my eyes prepared to cry

I only wish I knew exactly how, what, when, and why?

I don’t know what I’m doing here
My muddled mind is far from clear
I’m surrounded by smoke and cologne
So how can I feel so alone?

My echoing heart is hollow
And my throat won’t make a sound.
There’s this lump that I can’t swallow
So I watch my feet move on the ground

My silence seems so un-profound

I knew it wouldn’t last
Much to my dismay
I suppose this pain will pass
However, till that day…

You’ve shocked me speechless, babe!
In every kind of way.
©2008-2009 =Agent-Angel
:iconagent-angel:

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:music:It's been a long day! Always.:music:

I'm just gonna flop in bed now :)

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:iconmikahniamhjonas:
This is amazing, very well structured, good rhythm. Not to mention the content *faves*

~Mikah

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Strength through Unity. Unity through Faith.
:iconmyownformoftherapy:
I really like how you have a few lines not-quite attached to stanzas

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"What's after this?" "Third base..." -Devi
Hey batter, batter, batter, batter SWING -Emily P. and Dark

yay hands! [link]
:icontwighlightmoon:
I love it I love it!! I wish I could write as well as you!! (oh, p.s. I'm baaack)

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I'll just keep fueling the fire til I burn to death
:icontwighlightmoon:
Thank you and your welcome!! (LOL) :glomp:

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I'll just keep fueling the fire til I burn to death
:icontwighlightmoon:
I been good. Kewl as a kewcumber (spelled wrong on purpose) My history trip was great!

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I'll just keep fueling the fire til I burn to death

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